Finally. But it's fully told and not shown - how brilliant both Kane and Abel are. Would not have got past my editor Keerti. At one point I actually got tired of the narrative, not sure what it would offer me because the two did not interest me any more.
Lacked an interesting character, one who had a strong motive, rather than a vague one of destroying one another and making up because of their children. Not impressed at all. Sorry Mr. Archer.
Lacked an interesting character, one who had a strong motive, rather than a vague one of destroying one another and making up because of their children. Not impressed at all. Sorry Mr. Archer.
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